July 2, 2010

They lie too deep

Thoughts oh so fragile,
from deep within
surface unbeckoned
at unsaid times.
Like effervescence,
oh! hard to hold!
so out of reach,
can't try and touch!

Thoughts oh so fragile,
from deep within
come and go
as they please!
They smile our smile,
and cry our tears
on stealthy toes
come rob our sleep!

Thoughts oh so fragile,
from deep within...

11 comments:

  1. i love this one. thoughts...come and go as they please...wow! what a fantastic thought!

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  2. Amazing Himani. Love it. And thank you ... finally an English one :)

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  3. Thanks for the time and the 'love it', Prashanth! I must add here, that thoughts not only come as they please, they choose their own language too. :P I'll see if I can strike some deal with them for the language part!:D

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  4. Wow..Love it! Love it!! love it!!!! Keep it coming :)

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  5. They smile our smile,
    and cry our tears
    on stealthy toes
    come rob our sleep!


    Beautiful expression Sheen.


    I'm glad you stumbled upon mine so I could get here.

    Besties!

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  6. Thanks so much Tulika! Besties to you too!

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  7. Agreed in toto!
    Let us go back to school Ma'am!
    I have a doubt!
    Are these thoughts ALWAYS so fragile.....
    Please explain!!!!! :)

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  9. Hi Ashish, thanks for coming back! :)

    Ya, these thoughts that come unbeckoned from somewhere deep withing are always fragile for me...it may be subjective though, I guess...Btw, your "Agreed in toto!" is explanation in itself to your doubt.

    And, this is it for the explaining...the thoughts above are 'fragile' too! :-)

    On a different note...You may wanna read the April) post too.

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